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Lyn - Adult ver Collab Pt

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My RP OC~!
In purple theme? OwO

Sorry I'm not good enough ;w; I'm still learning. thanks for letting me have a go!

[link] by :iconqt-pixels:
OC :iconliartificialynsey:
2/22/2013
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you asked for critique so i will give you one :3
the first thing is that this is really too small for the collab- ideally, it should have been the same size as all the others ones ^^' it looks out of place when put with the rest.
The shading looks a bit messy but that is your style so its fine :3 the hair looks a bit flat, adding some more strands and stuff would help. The dress looks good, especially the pattern/details on it. the eyes are a little bit too far up the face and she needs a nose to look more natural ^^

i hope that helps!